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From my cranky editor, the marvelous S. Cat:

Here are your book-editing instructions:

Play this song, on repeat. Go through each chapter and look for words that don't need to be there. Assume the
reader understands the ferociously determined character through the story — the adventures — not necessarily the words. If you have to think about whether to delete a word or phrase more than three times, keep it in.

Good luck.

S.Cat



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